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post #11 of Old 07-30-2017, 01:54 AM
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I think it's a beautiful first effort. As a watercolor lover my only critique would be that you might want to allow the water flow a little more, and to get that depth you were after you might try building up layers of color and shape within the reeds. Lovely work though and to me the sky is beautiful.

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@Susan Mulno I guess you have a bunch of these by now. Care to share some more?
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@Susan Mulno I guess you have a bunch of these by now. Care to share some more?
I don't actually. I have other works but haven't played with the watercolors.

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I think it's a beautiful first effort. As a watercolor lover my only critique would be that you might want to allow the water flow a little more, and to get that depth you were after you might try building up layers of color and shape within the reeds. Lovely work though and to me the sky is beautiful.

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