Watercolor and colored pencil
It's kind of the purpose, to bring attention to the character.I think details will make it completely different. The shapes need lots of work. For example the trees and their branches look like cliffs and stones. They need to be more delicate. It seems you just focused on her face, and ignored other parts.
I know you wanted to bring attention to the character, and you did it somehow, but still it needs refinements.It should be believable for the viewers. Proportions aren't correct, and blurring the space to bring attention to the character doesn't help I guess.It's kind of the purpose, to bring attention to the character.