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This painting is a cross between Fantasy and Realism -- I guess it would be classified as surrealism (but I hate putting things in categories).

There is no reference photo to show you because this is completely my own composition out of my head, and I was just striving for a colorful fun painting.

Let me know what you would change if it were yours. I want to improve.
 

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Well here is the second tweaking. Why is that I don't see these things until after I think I'm finished with the painting. I added darker shadows. Blurred out the background. And added some reflective color. I think I'm happy with it now....maybe.
 

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Thanks Susan, but I got the urge to add some more sparkle to the water and also to make reflections of the lily pads in the water. OK Now I think it's done.

I dear anyone to say they can't tell where the light is coming from (that's been a constant problem in my pictures).
 

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You're like me. I've learned not to mat or frame for a day or two after I've signed it, because of improvements that must be made, dad gum it! I've also been doing imaginary paintings with watercolor recently, it's been more effective training than copying a subject.
 

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awesome work. the reed on the left end really bothers me though.. imho it would be awesome if you could turn them into leafes so they whirl out of the piece..
could do a quick chop if what i wrote doesnt make sense to you :)
Can not do, this painting has been sold and shipped. But thanks for the suggestion.
 

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You're like me. I've learned not to mat or frame for a day or two after I've signed it, because of improvements that must be made, dad gum it! I've also been doing imaginary paintings with watercolor recently, it's been more effective training than copying a subject.
With Oil Painting you have to wait at least a week (sometimes more) before doing anything like framing it or varnishing it. It does give me time to fix mistakes....and each fix extends the wait time. :wink:
 
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