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Hello,
I'm a new member here, hello everyone :)
sorry for my spelling in advance, because English i not my native language, so I am sorry :)
I am a musician, i don't study the art, but i like sometimes to draw some things. so I would really appreciate if You, artistic people, could give me some critics, advises or any comments. :)














 

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Hi Karolina, your work is great the piece you just posted is dramatic and tells an interesting story. The bird and the girl is a strong piece for several reasons which is why I like it most. The composition is very well thought out, the branch that goes across the top is a great stopper that forces your eye to stop at the top of of the page and keeps your focus on the main focal point, the triangulation of the girl, the bird and what the bird is holding keeps your eye flowing in a way that remains on the center of interest. The piece is simply complex and has a coherent message.

The piece with the heads could be a very strong piece although some elements are smashed together and could be taken out for better composition, such as the group of heads in the middle, also the atmospheric perspective on the groups of head could be toned down to represent space. I really like this piece but it is not as strong as it could be, to much in a small space.

Great works, can't wait to see more
 

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Thank you very much for such detailed comment :)
me myself i was thinking whats wrong with those "heads" work...but i just gave up finding out :D yes, maybe the problem is that there is too much in small place, maybe in future ill try to fix that.thank you for remark.

there is another one :)

 

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Your work is amazing. I love your use of light. Such a great feel to your pieces. Really enjoyed looking at all of them!
 

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I respect George's comments about the picture with the girl, bird and clock(?) There are some obvious alusions to Dali.

What stands out in your work for me is, like with the cello guy beating on the drum or your more recent upload with the ghost(?) coming up out of the person down the sidewalk is your fearless implication of movement....it's downright cinematic while in the hands of a less capable artist, it would have played out as cartoonish.
 

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Thank You for replies.
Well Dali is one of my favourite artists, so no wonder why its familiar to Dali :) Its a bit bad in one way, because I'm trying to find my own style...or how to say....put my imagination on the paper in my own way :) (sorry for my english). So sometimes its hard to dispose the influence of such a great artists.
Thank You for a kind words :)
 

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Allow me to apologize and, please, correct myself: you very much have your own style. Instead I mean that the genre you paint in, without doubt, is surrealism. Most people only know Dali's work in that genre because of his eccentric life beyond his art, so Dali has become somewhat (unfairly) synonymous with surrealism, but your work is full of elements unique and distinctly different than Dali yet they are a signature of yours! :)
 

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Nice to hear this :)
well Dali said himself that he is the only one surrealist in the world so no wonder why surrealism always goes with Dali :)
 

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Nobody is truly their own artist, they are all influenced by somebody or something they have seen but all artists have their own style no matter how you see their art. Dali is one of my biggest influences and most of my work looks nothing like his but is still yet has the influences that I came to love about is work.
 

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The above is a masterpiece! In the "world" of this painting these otherwise disparate components effortlessly combine! Then there's the implied circle of the piece holding the composition together, not quite exactly centered by the dreamcatcher. :)
 
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