[corydulos]

Definition: an unrhymed verse form of Japanese origin having three lines containing usually five, seven, and five syllables respectively

Here's a thread to write
A haiku of any kind
Night, morning or noon!

 

[corydulos]

New day approaches
Pure, fresh hope washes away
Yesterday's setbacks

 

[corydulos]

When a newer hurt
Opens up an older wound
Both will heal slower

 

[corydulos]

Well, I think what I actually do is write a sentence 13 syllables long lol. There was a guy on Friendster who started a haiku thread and his haikus were sublime!

I wish others would participate

 

[Ernest Scribbler]

Whats all this I thought?
Shall I try my hand at this?
Corydulos has

 

[corydulos]

Whats all this I thought?
Shall I try my hand at this?
Corydulos has

I'm loving it!

 

[Ernest Scribbler]

Haiku is good fun
My first attempt made you smile
That's gotta be good

.. and

A five seven five
not a seven five seven
keeps you in the groove

.... and as you had a suspicion that I might be part Cyborg (in the Pi thread) I
have do one in my native tongue.

1 0 1 1
1 1 1 0 1 1
1 1 1 0

Of course this must be read out in a Robotic 'Bender' voice from Futurama!

 

[corydulos]

I might my part Cyborg (in the Pi thread) I
have do one in my native tongue .

1 0 1 1
1 1 1 0 1 1
1 1 1 0

Of course this must be read out in a Robotic 'Bender' voice from Futurama!

The above statements are direct quotes (emphasis added by editor) of other-than-flesh-and-blood origin. Only a positronic brain conceives of using color-coded panels representing numerical values to reflect the constant used to calculate the circumference of a circle and call that art! And then does a binary haiku in his 'native language'!

Case rested.

 

[Ernest Scribbler]

Ha ha - brilliant, I love that. Your Haiku thread has been very amusing & productive.

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[Ernest Scribbler]

Finishing Touches to Sophia

With pencil in hand
Sophia must be shaded
The deadline is near


Note: Robot Hand by Andrew Lin at Trimble Sketchup Warehouse

 

[corydulos]

Sophia's beauty
Deserves the finest artist
You meet the challenge

 

[corydulos]

Be truthful, Ernest
That robotic hand we see
Is actually yours!

 

[corydulos]

Make the best of time
Day, night, neither good nor bad
But how we use them

 

[Ernest Scribbler]

All night with Debbie
Harry that is, it is hard
to catch her beauty

...steady! It's my latest Portrait I'm having a little difficulty with.

 

[corydulos]

All night with Debbie
Harry that is, it is hard
to catch her beauty

...steady! It's my latest Portrait I'm having a little difficulty with.

If it were simple
The effort would lack glory
When you reached your goal

 

[Ernest Scribbler]

Nicely put! ... See my post to Jeff on Bonn Scott thread concerning Debbie

 

[corydulos]

Times flies like arrow
Fruit flies like a banana
Loose quote, Groucho Marx

 

[Ernest Scribbler]

P.M. a Beatle
Are beetles like grasshoppers?
Grasshoppers like Paul

 

[Ernest Scribbler]

Previous Haiku
has promptly been updated
For Syllable count

 

[corydulos]

Ha ha! Poor (actually, quite rich) Paul falling prey to a plague of grasshoppers! He must've been singing 'Strawberry Fields' and got the wee blokes famished!