Thank you all for your comment's! I agree that if i was to look back at this and really dig deep, as you said chanda, i could add some more detail etc.
But i believe also this is the best one so far.
At the moment I have a really painful headache, whether it's a migraine or not I'm not exactly sure, but its constant pain at the back of my eye, feels like a brain freeze but way worse. I can't focus to draw so i'll be going to the doctors tomorrow.
Hopefully have another drawing up soon. Thank's again for your comment's!