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I think this is the longest I've ever taken to finish a painting. Anyway here it is. I'm keeping this one and I will probably get it framed.

This will give you an idea of the size. I look so tired in this photo, only because I am.
 

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Thank you Liz, Susan and Meli. Liz this took me about 3 weeks to finish. Usually my paintings take about 3 days. :wink:

One of the critique comments I got from @WFMartin on Wet Canvas was that it is several paintings combined and has no central focal point. Like it could be cut up into 4 paintings each with it's one main subject. I totally agree with this observation because all along I have been struggling to figure out how to put a main focal point into this painting and finally gave up. :biggrin: But that's what learning is all about, figuring out what could have been done better and doing it better next time.
 

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I like your painting as is. I personally don't see dividing it up. Although, you might consider adding highlight to the rose in the lower right. that would make it pop. Also just a little highlight to the other roses, (not much). Just for balance.
 

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It's beautiful ,love the background colors too. 3 weeks wow , reminds me that I need to be more patient if I want better looking paintings lol.
 

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I like the bright cheery colors. It's a feel good painting. I think it's well done. Thanks. :)
 
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