[Erilia]

This is a work in progress, it's far from finished, but I wanted to share with you the first sketch, because I'm interested in your opinion, it will eventually become something in color... I think, we'll see.
Thank you for watching.

 

[TerryCurley]

It's a wonderful picture. Her expression looks like she is frightened. I think it's the eyes. Was that the intent?

 

[Susan Mulno]

This is a great start!

 

[Erilia]

@TerryCurley Thank you :laugh: And yes frightened was one of the intent, nice catch !
@Susan Mulno Thank you, I'm happy you think so :laugh:

 

[Erilia]

Here's an update

 

[Melody Jeoulex]

Ooooohh..nice start for the face girl

 

[Erilia]

@Melody Jeoulex Thank you ! :laugh:

 

[leighann]

The accents at the collarbone is nice, you don't see that often. I do see a fear in her eyes, but it's muted, which is cool. :vs_cool:

 

[Erilia]

@leighann Thank you for your comment ! :smile:

 

[FanKi]

The only thing I find incorrect is the outlining in her chin (Just saying, maybe you didn't notice, maybe you know it but it's just a sketch, dunno >.<)

Besides that, it's beautiful :3 Love her expression ^^

 

[Erilia]

@FanKi Thank you for your comment, I'm happy you like it, and thank you for the chin comment, you're right, it wasn't good :smile:

 

[Erilia]

Here's an updated, working on perspective right now

 

[Melody Jeoulex]

It's like someone is following her...DUN DUN DUUUUUN!

 

[Erilia]

Suspense !!!!!!!!!

 

[just]

A world of improvement. Love it

 

[FanKi]

Why is she hiding?
Oh wait, there are 2 people with tunics there! Run my dear! Move awaaaaaaaaayyyy!!!!!


Is this all from your mind?? Cuz you are doing really well

 

[TerryCurley]

This great. I love the suspense of it all.

 

[soperfect paint]

Beautiful picture with a frightened expression.

 

[Erilia]

@just Thank you, I'm trying to improve, so happy happy you think it's happening :vs_laugh:
@FanKi Yes it is all from my mind, which is really nerve wreaking cause I tend to not be satisfied if it doesn't look exactly like what's in my mind :vs_frown:
And thank you for saying I'm doing well FanKi :biggrin:
@TerryCurley I'm happy you feel a sense of suspense, I like when people get feeling out of my drawing :biggrin:
@soperfect paint Thank you, and welcome to the forum :vs_laugh: