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Ryotsu
12-17-2013, 08:28 PM
Hi! I need a critique on this sketch (http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2013/351/8/4/sketch_by_ryotsu_san-d6yc36u.jpg). I really want it to be precise. Can someone tell me if it looks wrong in any way?

Thanks~ :)

chanda95
12-19-2013, 11:50 AM
Well - It's cute whatever it is..what is it?

I would prefer to see shade work to add more depth and dimension - It's obviously meant to be a cartoon but cartoons still require shading.

Is there any possibly way to get rid of the original outline lines?