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: Help! In need of a critique

12-17-2013, 07:28 PM
Hi! I need a critique on this sketch ( I really want it to be precise. Can someone tell me if it looks wrong in any way?

Thanks~ :)

12-19-2013, 10:50 AM
Well - It's cute whatever it is..what is it?

I would prefer to see shade work to add more depth and dimension - It's obviously meant to be a cartoon but cartoons still require shading.

Is there any possibly way to get rid of the original outline lines?