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: Jack Johnson In Progress - Crit?


Sarah
06-25-2013, 01:48 PM
Ok so I'm drawing Jack Johnson.
I'm going for the more realistic look and spending a bit of time on this one.
Here's a W.I.P so far;
http://i576.photobucket.com/albums/ss208/Sarmclaughlan/Portrait%20Drawings/1013905_4940945450533_1450813019_n2_zps644ed808.jp g (http://s576.photobucket.com/user/Sarmclaughlan/media/Portrait%20Drawings/1013905_4940945450533_1450813019_n2_zps644ed808.jp g.html)

And here's the ref;
http://www.rozsavage.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/11/jack_johnson_09.jpg

critique is appreciated

George924
06-25-2013, 02:52 PM
I would hate to critique this as of right now...I think it would deter your process in which it is very nicely rendered.

Sarah
06-25-2013, 03:20 PM
Thank You George, I have already made some changes on the lip's etc, will post up finished soon :)

stanya
06-25-2013, 04:37 PM
looks nice and real so far,,once the hair is done and if u pull it out then it will be ur best so far.

corydulos
06-25-2013, 04:57 PM
So far....dangerously good :cool:

Sarah
06-26-2013, 04:24 AM
thank you both, the hairs coming along lovely, ill be doing the background too then once finished ill post on here :)

Sarah
06-26-2013, 01:09 PM
Finished the drawing :)
http://i576.photobucket.com/albums/ss208/Sarmclaughlan/Portrait%20Drawings/994286_4945856813314_1844113790_n3_zpsd2f0d57b.jpg

Jeff
06-26-2013, 01:47 PM
Outstanding Sarah!!! :)

Sarah
06-26-2013, 03:30 PM
Thank you so much Jeff!!
I'm quite proud of this one
I'm going to keep on doing what im doing, spending more time on them and being more patient, seem's like it's paying off! haha.

stanya
06-26-2013, 06:22 PM
It is really good,,

there are 2 things I have to point out, his hair on the side of his head around the ear is asking for some texture,,to me loox too dark with no texture and so somehow its quite flat or looks like a big hole in the head.
the other thing: would look even more realistic if there would be strings on the guitar neck

rapperthatdraws
06-26-2013, 07:12 PM
great job!

Sarah
06-27-2013, 05:39 AM
@stanya - thanks, ill touch it up later :)
@rapper - thanks!

fabeer
06-29-2013, 12:48 AM
spectacular !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :} it is beyond critique. wonderful, melodious light &shade

Sarah
06-29-2013, 05:14 AM
Thank you fabeer! Really means a lot ! :)