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George
03-10-2018, 10:19 PM
I have drawn on and off for a number of years, but I now want to truly commit myself to it. I would greatly appreciate it if anybody here could look at what I have drawn most recently(an African deer figurine) and give me their thoughts on it. I am more interested in realism than anything else.

Glenda
03-13-2018, 03:03 PM
Hey George,

The sketch is not bad, may I recommend more levels of shadowing on the deer's torso, I think that would enhance the drawing. Great job, keep it up :)

~ Glenda

sl60
03-17-2018, 11:54 AM
The drawing looks pretty solid, but you need work on the values. Try shining a bright light on the figurine and concentrate on seeing the graduation from darkest darks to brightest highlights. Depicting this graduation will achieve realism.

George
04-02-2018, 07:49 PM
I've been drawing daily since I started this thread. These are all of figurines. Have I improved at all?

Glenda
04-03-2018, 08:51 AM
I see an improvement in the first, third and fourth image. Your shadows and shapes have improved a lot, are you also using different numbered pencils or just one?

Great job :)

~ Glenda

George
04-03-2018, 01:41 PM
Currently I just use a number two pencil. I don't really know how to get into the different graphite grades. Do you think using a grid would help me?