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: Michael Jackson.


Sarah
05-18-2013, 03:04 PM
Sorry if i post to many thread's guys. From now on i'll just post the finished piece.
Anyway here's Michael Jackson.
http://i576.photobucket.com/albums/ss208/Sarmclaughlan/Portrait%20Drawings/DSCI0900-3_zpsd84c1310.png (http://s576.photobucket.com/user/Sarmclaughlan/media/Portrait%20Drawings/DSCI0900-3_zpsd84c1310.png.html)

crit would be immensely appreciated.

corydulos
05-18-2013, 07:31 PM
Bursting from the seams of this virtual hall and we call the Artist Forum is that titular late King of Pop himself. Now, I did have some crit for your Bradley piece, but since you're trucking on, (and life has been quick for me this week) I'll save it. Here I want to point out a couple of quickies:

1. Mike had incredibly high cheekbones even before his face received...adjustments. And even you faithfully reflect that on the right cheek...but the left cheek is flat as an iron, and that contour should be evident even in a 3/4 profile. Instead, as it is, it looks puffy and swollen.

2. That elongated ring finger makes his left hand appear crippled (while it is usually the longest finger, that distance you have is monstrous); being in the foreground of the picture, the hand as a whole should also be a little larger as per perspective.

Now I could write 10x as much on what I like about this work, but an aspiring artist such as yourself asked for crit, not praise. And...this is my last crit for you because I command myself to S.U.A.D. (Shut Up And Draw lol) more, write less.

Sarah
05-19-2013, 05:01 AM
Bursting from the seams of this virtual hall and we call the Artist Forum is that titular late King of Pop himself. Now, I did have some crit for your Bradley piece, but since you're trucking on, (and life has been quick for me this week) I'll save it. Here I want to point out a couple of quickies:

1. Mike had incredibly high cheekbones even before his face received...adjustments. And even you faithfully reflect that on the right cheek...but the left cheek is flat as an iron, and that contour should be evident even in a 3/4 profile. Instead, as it is, it looks puffy and swollen.

2. That elongated ring finger makes his left hand appear crippled (while it is usually the longest finger, that distance you have is monstrous); being in the foreground of the picture, the hand as a whole should also be a little larger as per perspective.

Now I could write 10x as much on what I like about this work, but an aspiring artist such as yourself asked for crit, not praise. And...this is my last crit for you because I command myself to S.U.A.D. (Shut Up And Draw lol) more, write less.

Yeah I had trouble with the hands and the other side of his face, I'll touch it up later. Thank you for your crit cory! I'll have to practice drawing hand's I can't get the hang of them haha. Yes do some drawing's or digital art, i'd love to see them!

rapperthatdraws
05-20-2013, 04:31 PM
looks cool!!