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: Identity Games #8:::Please Crit::::

11-21-2015, 09:20 PM

A Harvest ( Identity Games #8)
oil on canvas

11-22-2015, 06:21 AM
Hi Neil, welcome to the forum.

You have a very unique style of painting which is quite good, however I find the composition is lacking. I'm not sure what I'm looking at. It looks like men attacking to me.

11-23-2015, 02:35 PM
Thanks for your comment. The composition has always been a problem. It was a piece i abandoned five years ago but held onto and sm reworking. I can see how it gets confusing visually as well. I usually let the unconscious dictate the character action. Sometimes it works and sometimes not. I'll keep working it. Thanks!