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: My First 3d attempt, what improvements still needed?


icko11
10-08-2015, 04:11 AM
The image is Here (https://fliiby.com/file/qjbrm62sl2s/)

I just used ballpoint pen drawing. What improvements can I still do?

https://d1mr5irvqzosls.cloudfront.net/thumbs/image/qjbrm62sl2s_300x250.jpg (https://fliiby.com/file/qjbrm62sl2s)ballpoint pen drawing (https://fliiby.com/file/qjbrm62sl2s) by icko11 (https://fliiby.com/icko11), on Fliiby

dickhutchings
10-08-2015, 06:46 AM
Give to me to eat. Seriously, I'm a drawing newbie and I can't add a thing to this discussion except... wait for it


WOW. That is something for me to aspire to right there. Great work!

deehouse
10-08-2015, 08:53 AM
That looks good enough to eat!!!

Melody Jeoulex
10-08-2015, 09:34 AM
Wow. It's my favorite! Sorry I can't share anything that can help you improve it. It looks great to me already!

chanda95
10-08-2015, 09:48 AM
VERY VERY nice work!

karliejaye
10-08-2015, 05:17 PM
Whoa! That is awesome! I really like it.
If pressed to improve something, the only thing I see slightly "off" is the leaves in the upper right. They look a little dull and flat, but only compared to the rest. And that is just nit picking. It looks sensational as is!

TerryCurley
10-08-2015, 07:18 PM
My mouth is drooling! Fantastic drawing.

Welcome to the forum.

FanKi
10-08-2015, 11:49 PM
Well... if you want to improve that you may print it with a 3D-printer and then eat it >.<

Stunning work.

PS: I like your signature, it's like a graff tag >.<

Leo
10-09-2015, 05:24 AM
that is awesome you did an amazing job and I can't think of anyways to improve it either ^^

Eddieblz
10-11-2015, 11:54 PM
You can draw another one for us.