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: My First 3d attempt, what improvements still needed?

10-08-2015, 03:11 AM
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I just used ballpoint pen drawing. What improvements can I still do? ( pen drawing ( by icko11 (, on Fliiby

10-08-2015, 05:46 AM
Give to me to eat. Seriously, I'm a drawing newbie and I can't add a thing to this discussion except... wait for it

WOW. That is something for me to aspire to right there. Great work!

10-08-2015, 07:53 AM
That looks good enough to eat!!!

Melody Jeoulex
10-08-2015, 08:34 AM
Wow. It's my favorite! Sorry I can't share anything that can help you improve it. It looks great to me already!

10-08-2015, 08:48 AM
VERY VERY nice work!

10-08-2015, 04:17 PM
Whoa! That is awesome! I really like it.
If pressed to improve something, the only thing I see slightly "off" is the leaves in the upper right. They look a little dull and flat, but only compared to the rest. And that is just nit picking. It looks sensational as is!

10-08-2015, 06:18 PM
My mouth is drooling! Fantastic drawing.

Welcome to the forum.

10-08-2015, 10:49 PM
Well... if you want to improve that you may print it with a 3D-printer and then eat it >.<

Stunning work.

PS: I like your signature, it's like a graff tag >.<

10-09-2015, 04:24 AM
that is awesome you did an amazing job and I can't think of anyways to improve it either ^^

10-11-2015, 10:54 PM
You can draw another one for us.