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: Daises in Vase


TerryCurley
10-05-2015, 06:16 PM
While I was waiting for my ocean to dry I did a couple of pictures. Both are Daisies in Vases. Helpful critique is welcome.

chanda95
10-06-2015, 10:35 AM
Terry!!! Jumping up and down with happiness for you! LOOK AT HOW FAR YOU HAVE COME!!! That one in the glass vase is my absolute favorite. The ONLY thing I would change..and it's very very minor..is I would put a slight shadow under the flowers on the table..and a very slight shadow at that. This is hands down my favorite so far of all your works.

I really like the one in the red vase however what I am not fond of is the red vase against the pink background and the brownish table. The colors contrast. aside from that you did a great job with it as well and I love how you have added contrast and depth and it is obvious you are working hard on your lighting and developing distinct light sources.

GREAT JOB.

TerryCurley
10-06-2015, 01:14 PM
Chanda you made me feel so good. I'll work on these a little more today and add those small shadows on the flowers. Thank you so much.:vs-kiss:

Asancta
10-06-2015, 02:25 PM
Told you that painting flowers is your thing :)

TerryCurley
10-06-2015, 06:47 PM
Did a little tweaking.

deehouse
10-08-2015, 09:30 AM
Terry, I really love your choice of colors, it really brings the flowers out nicely!!!

chanda95
10-08-2015, 10:37 AM
very very nice Terry!!! Great job.

FanKi
10-09-2015, 12:04 AM
Now that transparent vase is amazing girl!

Why there are "half white and half yellow" flowers? O.o?
I found them... rare

TerryCurley
10-09-2015, 09:26 AM
Hmmm .. half white and half yellow flowers is not what I was trying to do, I was trying to show a strong light from the left side and the other half (the yellow) being in shadow. I think a little is the photo, but I did tweak the painting a little since I posted the last picture here.

FanKi
10-09-2015, 12:54 PM
Oh well it can be that too. I think that if you shadow a little more the mid-flower, giving more tones between the shadow and the light side (Like you did with the one is in the top) it will be perfectly represented ^^
Not in all the flowers, only the one wich is right in the middle of the pic.

I guess that cuz it's the one that make me feel like there were half-white half-yellow. Wait for someone else to talk about because maybe I'm wrong and I do not want to ruin this beautiful painting >.<

chanda95
10-09-2015, 01:06 PM
Hmmm .. half white and half yellow flowers is not what I was trying to do, I was trying to show a strong light from the left side and the other half (the yellow) being in shadow. I think a little is the photo, but I did tweak the painting a little since I posted the last picture here.

I prefer this version. I like what you have done here. I wouldn't touch it any more..