Need Advice and Feedback [Archive] - Artist Forum

: Need Advice and Feedback


rayyan
12-05-2014, 11:53 AM
Hi All

I am an immature in arts but very passionate about it. I've made few painings recetnly 2 in pastels and one oil paining. Appreciate if you can give me advice, suggestions and feedback on these, and that how can I improve myself as I really want to get better at it.

DLeeG
12-05-2014, 03:00 PM
You should learn vanishing point. The center line in the road for example is not as wide in the background as it's in the foreground. Fine then brushes and brush strokes would give better details.

JohanMalm
12-08-2014, 11:51 PM
Yes. learn the rule then brake it. The detail of the center line in pic nr 2 not vanishing is the thing I like most of the paintings.

But if you're aiming for realism, you should listen to DLeeG :)

vd90
12-10-2014, 02:59 AM
You need to practice more to improve it however as a new person its good

SSFT
12-10-2014, 11:03 AM
These seems to be pretty good for me

TerryCurley
01-04-2015, 05:52 PM
I love the trees and the sky in your oil painting. Honestly since I do painting I didn't even look closely at the pastels. I see where you did get smaller as things, including the road got far away, but there are other things you can do to make it more realistic. Things far away are always lighter and less distinct than things close up. Also I feel your transition from here to there is too sudden, a gradual reduction instead of a sudden reduction in size would be more realistic. But honestly I think you have lots of talent and I like your work.