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: Portrait of child


Sarah
03-04-2013, 01:37 PM
Just finished a portrait of a child.
Feedback appreciated.
(bit fuzzy due to terrible camera)
http://i46.tinypic.com/352ohad.jpg

George924
03-04-2013, 06:25 PM
Hi Sarah, welcome to the forums...very nicely done. Although there is nothing you can do about it now but the eyes are a bit off, the one to the left is a bit to high and is slightly bigger than it should be. When I do my portraits I always make the eyes bigger in every subject, about 5 to 6% bigger. Very nicely rendered other than the eye...I would not try to fix it if I was you though it stands as a very nice piece as it is.

Sarah
03-05-2013, 03:57 AM
Hi George. When you look at the actual drawing in real life, it looks alot better and it doesn't look squinted. But I can see one eye is slightly more bigger than the other. I find it hard to draw eyes and shape them exactly the same. Thank you for your feedback, I much appreciated it. I will continue to draw portraits and use your advice about making the eyes bigger. Thanks again :)

jbundtzen
03-10-2013, 08:42 PM
eyes are a little off and the midline curves slightly as you go from nose to mouth to chin. but overall it is lovely, very striking and a work to be proud of.