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: First picture here for your critique


goodguy
05-13-2014, 10:55 PM
A picture of a girl
Your feedback will greatly appreciated.

http://i516.photobucket.com/albums/u330/alfa170a/20140513_224700_zpsc2589439.jpg

goodguy
05-19-2014, 09:48 AM
I used on this picture a combination of charcoal and colour pencils.
Thank you for the kind words

DLeeG
05-19-2014, 11:32 AM
You might want to use highlights and shadows to give it depth.

goodguy
05-19-2014, 12:26 PM
You might want to use highlights and shadows to give it depth.

Thank you for the helpful feedback

photoman
05-21-2014, 03:33 AM
I also agree with what DLeeG has mentioned. If you use shading and highlighting you will find that you will get more structure to the face. The drawing itself though is very good.

Marielle Collins
05-21-2014, 05:02 AM
I really like your drawing, and although more highlights would give it more depth, you captured this girl's personality well.

james85273
05-26-2014, 06:21 AM
You have a nice line! - But as mentioned, you should look further in to shadowing! Work with the shadows, the shadows are your friend:)

Michael Graves
06-02-2014, 12:43 PM
Like everyone has said...nice picture! More shading is needed as well as more colors...dont be afraid to experiment with your work. Getting a nice picture is just the first phase...the devil is always in the details;)

pencils
06-07-2014, 10:08 PM
Backgrounds are as important as the subject, looks to me like the background here was an afterthought, it doesn`t do anything for the drawing in my opinion. Does it look like her? It`s not a bad drawing, keep working at it, takes time.