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post #1 of Old 06-24-2020, 09:58 PM Thread Starter
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I drew this after my 10-part Mr. Hep series. I'm not sure if I want to do 10 more ads with Maurice, as I don't know as much about flappers as I do Beatniks. What do you think? Is this a pretty good drawing? I think Maurice is potentially a pretty interesting character but I dunno too much about the general flapper aesthetic. Anyway, here she is, leave your thoughts below. Thanks!
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I drew this after my 10-part Mr. Hep series. I'm not sure if I want to do 10 more ads with Maurice, as I don't know as much about flappers as I do Beatniks. What do you think? Is this a pretty good drawing? I think Maurice is potentially a pretty interesting character but I dunno too much about the general flapper aesthetic. Anyway, here she is, leave your thoughts below. Thanks!
I have one interesting suggestion for u.. Maybe u can try use scribble sketch to draw this artwork. because for me it is unique and interesting compare to the drawing that u have done... If u want some inspiration u can look at this website https://vincelow.com.my/ this is the example
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Nah, that's not really the aesthetic I'm going for, I'm going for a light and frizzy A.H. Hayward kinda look. Period accurate but fresh and appealing
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