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post #1 of Old 06-16-2016, 01:47 AM Thread Starter
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Kuretake Landscape

This was my first attempt at any kind of landscape, I've been working through the concepts I want (Both story and art) for an RPG I'm working on, and I wanted to come up with a menu background. With a vague idea, a Kuretake pen, and my sketchbook, I took to the kitchen table and drew whatever came to mind. As I finished the base design, I realized I had no idea how to draw clouds. After some reference photos, a few tutorials, and a bit of searching for my Pentel Japanese brush pen, I had something I was mostly satisfied with and ready to receive feedback on.

So without further ado, I'll add the piece and accept any feedback!
Kuretake Landscape-first-landscape.jpg
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post #2 of Old 06-16-2016, 05:22 PM
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It is a good first try!

I think you need more mid range tones however. You definitely have whites and darks but no greys, no subtle changes from shadow to light.

How long have you been drawing?
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Thank you for your advice! I actually just ordered a set of gray pens, didn't have any to work with yet! I've been drawing since I was around three, though I imagine everyone drew at young ages. It was only about three or four months ago that I decided to take my art seriously and work my way towards illustration and animation as a career.
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