You're asking Dick, so hope you don't take offence......(-:
The group are a bit central IMO and the picture a little too ( stretched) wide. Maybe angle the girls off to one side a little If it were me I'd make the figures bigger and put some recognisable detail in the background for them. The view will be eminently recognisable to you all. As they are they look a bit lost in all that space. Hope my doctoted picture gives the idea.
Indeed, indeed, Repentance oft before, I swore---but was I sober when I swore?
And then and then came Spring, and Rose-in-hand, My thread-bare Penitence apieces tore.