Join Date: May 2016
Location: Stockholm, Sweden
An attractive painting. But you should have composed the still life better. The flasks stand in a row and are similar in height. It is monotonous. You could have put some small thing to the left, to create a diagonal. You could have added an opaque object to contrast with the transparent flasks, perhaps nearer to the viewer, to improve the feeling of space. Composition means everything when it comes to still lifes.