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drone77 07-21-2019 01:27 PM

Feedback on my contour drawing
 
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Please provide feedback on my contour drawing and feel free to offer any suggestion:smile:Attachment 56883

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Kuverte 07-29-2019 03:10 AM

I prefer the first one, only the last half of body is slightly to small in comparison with head. Nevertheless you did a great job.
If you continue as you did, you will soon be a very good artist. But you have to realize that drawing horses is very difficult. They are just like people: every mistake you did, it is visible.
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Paint 08-01-2019 08:45 AM

The first one body is more in proportion except for the back of the horse it needs to be bigger, love the pose

Kristikay 08-07-2019 10:56 PM

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Iím a 70-year-old life-long artist and horsewoman; horseís, of course, are my favorite subject and Iíd just advise you to study horse anatomy and do lots of sketches. Iíd agree, the hindquarters of the horse you drew is too small compared to the front; also the barrel (the main body) is too thin...just bring the back up, coming off the withers a bit higher. That shows especially in the first drawing. The right front leg needed to be bent......I donít know if this helps but it might be a good start. Iíve made some corrections in red on your picture..... Happy drawing!


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