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post #1 of Old 05-02-2015, 08:29 AM Thread Starter
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Question Feedback & Help with my Graphite drawing of Wolves

Just getting back into artwork after many years away and wanted to practice making animals look more realistic. I use graphite pencil for now. Would appreciate any feedback or help with completing the drawing. The first attachment is the wolf cubs I did yesterday which I was pleased with and the second attachment what I started this morning but fear I may ruin it or already have.
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post #2 of Old 05-02-2015, 09:13 AM
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Welcome to the forum and welcome back to art!

These are lovely sketches. I do not think you have ruined anything. I have just returned to art after a 30 something year hiatus, so I will leave technical advice to those more advanced than I.

The one piece of advice I am able to give, if you aren't having fun, your doing it wrong!

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These sketches are wonderful. Glad you are joining us here on the forum.



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Hi Jaz, welcome to the forum.
I love the way your drawing is going, I would continue as you are, just take your time.
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post #5 of Old 05-02-2015, 02:18 PM Thread Starter
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so I went ahead and finished today

Thanks, means a lot to receive comments as I don't show my work very often. I'm not completely happy with this drawing but I should have redrawn the adult wolf head I think as the base line wasn't correct, it just looks a bit like a fox now... next time. I was trying to draw more realistic fur in this one anyway, some parts worked well I thought then got muddled at others like the shoulder area and the right side of the muzzle and under the jaw never mind, on to the next one later.
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Any advice on the best type of paper to use for graphite as I only have my photocopy paper at the moment and find it smudges and looks quite grainy. Also want to buy some mechanical pencils for finer detail.
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Any advice on the best type of paper to use for graphite as I only have my photocopy paper at the moment and find it smudges and looks quite grainy. Also want to buy some mechanical pencils for finer detail.
I prefer the medium weight Strathmore paper for the usual stuff, if you like more texture pastel paper gives some nice effects.

Haven't tried mechanical pencils, I am an old fashioned kinda girl and prefer wood.

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I love your work! Its true, it looks a bit like a fox, but its great anyway, I like how you do their skin, it looks amazing ^^
Keep drawing! Your are great!


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post #9 of Old 05-03-2015, 11:02 PM
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The drawing is good. The detailing is well done. I just think the neck area needs some changes. See how the reference looks. Great work !!
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post #10 of Old 05-03-2015, 11:35 PM
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Looks good.



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