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post #1 of Old 10-04-2016, 07:36 AM Thread Starter
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Riverside Cottages re-visited

Following a number of comments I have made a few tweaks to this piece. I hope these have taken it in the right direction. I am still finding difficulty painting shadows.
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Advice would be much appreciated.
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Given the direction of the shadows in the water of the tall grass, I would only suggest a slightly brighter color of the grass in the foreground to further enhance the direction of light. I love the feel of this scene.
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Hi Orbt0,
Thanks for your comments they are very much appreciated.
I have changed a few things on this picture yet again. I have changed the shadow on the water to look more like reflection and introduced reeds/long grasses to this side of the water.
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